What's Happening!?

Walt write a narrative using the correct structure.
I know this when I write an introduction, 
body and a conclusion.

St Patrick’s school was off to Sylvia Park to watch films that students have made for the manaiakalani film festival. Something in plan for them. It was going to be a scary trip for St Patrick’s school. I wonder what was to happen to them?

On Wednesday, St Patrick’s school went to the movies to watch the manaiakalani film festival. We travelled on a bus to go to the movies. However, something strange started happening on the bus, the teachers became zombies and the bus driver became a spirit. All the kids started to feel really scared and they were put under a sleeping spell for one hour. One hour later, the kids woke up from the one hour rest time and discovered that they were at ghoul land.

When the teachers went out of the bus, they went to their Zombie lair and started to sleep. Then the bus driver went out of the bus and he came back with a crystal ball and his other spirit friends. After that, the students wanted to explore ghoul land but they couldn’t because their bottoms were stuck to the chairs and they couldn’t move their bodies. Then when it became night, kids started moving and they were able to move again. So they wasted no time and tried to find a way out.

One of the kids saw a button that said ‘Back to the real world’ so she told everyone about the button the was on that bus. However they didn’t know that it won’t work without the bus keys and the bus driver had it with him. So when they pressed the button it didn’t work, they started to panic. However one brave student thought about an idea she said “Let’s get the smallest person to go outside and break the crystal ball and get the bus driver’s keys”. They all replied “Great idea!” So they got the smallest person and told her to sneak out and five minutes later she came back with the keys and they were finally saved!

Just then Ella marie woke up from her dream and she was so glad it was not true or was it?