WALT use the correct structure in our writing. I know I have done this when I have explained everything about dogs.
A dog is a four legged animal. It is a part of the wolf family. It is a domesticated animal. They are kind creatures. They have a good sense of smell and hearing. Dogs are mammals. Some dogs can run really fast. Dogs are really energetic.
Dogs are man's best friend, dogs are cute and loving animals. Dogs are very loyal to their owners. They look after their owners and keep them away from harm. Dogs are curious with the world and likes to run around the block and see what's around the corner.
A Pomeranian is a type of dog which is a small and lovable. They have almond shaped ears, an overcoat and a long tail. These dogs are good and loyal pets.
They are trained to stay inside the house. They need to be walked every day for exercise. Pomeranians are the fifteenth most popular pet dog. They are famously called poms or pom pom because of their shape and size. The Pomeranian dog is a titanic survivor because it's owner Margaret Hays survived the titanic. A pom pom can live up to 12 - 16 years old. The awkward stage for Pomeranian dogs are when they are a teen, their hair falls of and there could be bald spots.
A person who is interested to have a Pomeranian as a pet. They could go to the SPCA to adopt. A person needs to pay a small amount to the SPCA then the person could take the puppy home. The person can take it for walks and let them eat food that they have to eat. They need to be potty trained like babies so they will not make a mess inside the house. The pets could be dressed up in cute, fancy clothes. They could also be taught tricks like fetch roll over, sit and shake hands. To keep these dogs lovely and healthy they need to make a visit to the vet regularly. They also need to be groomed and washed so that fleas will not stay in their fur. When dogs are for sale, they are usually very expensive. The normal ranges from $700 to $1,200. Some people make a living out of breeding and selling dogs because they sell really well.
Dogs are important because, they care for you, protect you from any harm and guide you if you are blind.
Hi Chaim
ReplyDeleteYour structure in your writing is great! I want to have a puppy now. I would love a Pomeranian! You could write about what they eat, where to buy food, and how to take care of them.