Our sins have been forgiven!

WALT write a recount using the correct structure.

I know I can do this when I have put my  ideas in order and into paragraphs.

On Friday 18th of April, we went to church. Everyone was walking towards Saint Patrick's School.  My mum received a paper that had 13 pages in all of the paper. On the front v page it had the words ‘ Stations of the Cross’ written on it. After that we all started to pray. Everybody was wearing something black and their faces looked so sad,  some people were even crying it was a really sad time for the Christians. There was something different in the Stations of the Cross people were saying it in different languages.

The different languages were English, Maori, Filipino, Samoan, Tongan. Every time there is a change of language there is a different person carrying the cross. The first person who carried the cross was Father Michael. He carried the cross up to room 8 which the was the third station.Then it was Cheska's dad was carrying the cross all the way to front of room 5 then more people until the end. Station 13 was when we all went back to church. In the church we started saying a prayer for Jesus. Once everything was finished we went back home. I felt really sad for Jesus when Station of the Cross happened.